Hi everybody!

I have some trouble with my english homework.

What mistakes do you found in the following phrase?

Thaks!!!! (k)

"""Our goal while developing this project is to find unexploited markets, by creating original marketing strategies that will improve the market share of Sporto Company. Our company’s main objective is the maximization of profits through the final consumer’s satisfaction with a product of global excellence.
Besides being a product that takes care of environment, the use of 100% organic cotton made infant apparel can protect the skin of both our children and us. Usually babies and children are more sensitive than adults to synthetic chemicals. Given that fact, choosing clothes made with organic cotton can help to reduce your exposure to harmful chemicals for their skins and bodies. The use of organic cotton clothing for babies, it is highly recommended, since their delicate skin requires extra special care and extra soft tissues that have contact with your skin, especially in those with diseases such as atopic dermatitis."""

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I’m in the process of starting my own clothing line. My main objective is to provide stylish gear for infants & toddlers. How can someone go about….contacting a brand that only offers men & women clothing, to outsource a few of their designs??? I would find the material to then be approved by the brand, manufacture them into infant & toddler sizes, and sold exclusively through my company.

I know a few companies have done so successfully, but I haven’t made contact with someone with advice or direction. What type of license or agreement? I have my business plan setup for getting the name out, going on the road to events, and marketing, but the most important thing I haven’t found any information on. Any assistance, advice, or experience would be much appreciated!!! Thanks!!

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