I’m a f/t grandma to my ‘at risk’ twin babies. It has not been the first time that the velcro scratches their delicate skin…but the last time was the last time I will use bibs with velcro. After I fed them I took their clothes off and noticed that one of the twins, had a big bruise where the velcro rubbed against his delicate skin. It has been four days and the bruise is now dried but still red, it pains me just to see it. I have to mention that my grandson is a little delayed and sometimes it’s difficult for him to feel pain. He is receiving therapy for this. I’m really upset that these bibs are very popular, what about just making bibs with snaps? Also the velcro is a nuisance when washing as they stick to other, delicate clothing snagging them…

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Hi everybody!

I have some trouble with my english homework.

What mistakes do you found in the following phrase?

Thaks!!!! (k)

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Besides being a product that takes care of environment, the use of 100% organic cotton made infant apparel can protect the skin of both our children and us. Usually babies and children are more sensitive than adults to synthetic chemicals. Given that fact, choosing clothes made with organic cotton can help to reduce your exposure to harmful chemicals for their skins and bodies. The use of organic cotton clothing for babies, it is highly recommended, since their delicate skin requires extra special care and extra soft tissues that have contact with your skin, especially in those with diseases such as atopic dermatitis."""

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