CAn you read this and just like gimmi ur opinion? plz and tank u!?
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when i saw your question, which was using poor grammar and spelling, i thought i would hate it. you totally surprised me with some decent writing. i loved the way you developed the main character. the only helpfull comment that i can see is to watch your verb tenses. you maintain a steady past tense use, but you threw in a few present tenses as well. i really hope you continue this and dont be afraid to send me more when you make it! good luck on the rest of your writing;)
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Is this a made up story? Doesn’t sound real to me